Homework due September 25th
Part 1: Log into TownSend Press and complete the following activities from the book Building Vocabulary Skills:
Chapter 4
· Vocabulary in Context
· Matching Words with Definitions
· Sentence Check 1
· Sentence Check 2
· Final Check
Part 2: This is a writing assignment where you will include at least 3 of the vocabulary words from chapter 4. You can also select words from chapter 6 if needed. Your paragraph should be at least 5 sentences long. Pay attention to grammar, punctuation, and overall clarity. At the bottom of your paragraph, please tell me which 3 words you used.
Role – Hiring manager
Audience – People looking for a job
Format – Job posting
Topic – Write a job description for the company of your choice.
9/11 was the most *ruthless* and unforgettable incident in the history of USA. It literally impacted every human on the planet in one way or the other.
ReplyDeleteEven after 22 years, some *radicals* still consider the incident to be a planned *propaganda* . People with such ideas have no *apathy* to the fact that thousands of innocent people lost their lives that day. That sacrifice can never be forgiven and forgotten. (Rola)
Student Rola
DeleteTownSend Press 44 /50
Vocabulary 30 /30 - all words used correctly
Length (5+ sentences) 10 /10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10 /10
Comments:
You did good Work Rola, just make sure to follow the instructions next time. Grade: 94
Job Description:
ReplyDeletePosition: Sales Development Representative
Location: Houston
Agenda:
Execute a strategic agenda to identify and engage with relevant prospects within the target market.
Collaborate with the sales team to create and maintain a robust pipeline of potential customers.
Utilize various communication channels, including email, phone, and social media, to initiate conversations with prospects. (Jason Liu)
Student Jason
DeleteTownSend Press 15/50
Vocabulary 20 /30 - only used 2 words
Length (5+ sentences) 6/10 - only wrote 3 sentences
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Jason,
Please tell me which words you used. I can see the words: prospects and agenda. They were both used correctly Grade: 51%
We are HIRING!
ReplyDeleteDue to company expansion, we are hiring prospective college graduates with an International Business or Business related degree. 2 years of relevant job experience preferred.
Job description includes reinforcing communication between our international partners. Please submit your resume to the email address below.
Amy55@htown.com
Student Amy
DeleteTownSend Press 44 /50
Vocabulary 0 /30 - didn’t use any of the vocabulary words
Length (5+ sentences) 8/10 - only wrote 4 sentences
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 0/10
Comments: Amy, this paragraph looks good, but it does not include any of the vocabulary words. Grade: 52
Job description: cleaning services/maintaince
ReplyDeleteSummary: to assist and manage attend calls for cleaning houses and commercial properties
Essential function: propaganda about the services provided by the company.
Maintaince of records about the calls and booking appointments for cleaning services.
Setting agenda for staff
Qualification: fluent English
Basic knowledge of computers
Basic knowledge of cleanilensse
Physical demand: ability to do physical work
Work environment : work wil be dependent where the customers need the cleaning services.
Noise level in the work environment may vary
Pay: will be discussed on virtual or in person meeting.
Contact person:Tarana Maknojia
Tara cleaning services
Star_ moon @gmail.com
8421323344
Words: propaganda
Agenda
Student Tarana
DeleteTownSend Press 29/50
Vocabulary 10/30 - only 1 word was used correctly
Length (5+ sentences) 10/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Didn’t use propaganda correctly. It is not a verb. Agenda was used correctly. I didn’t see a third word. Grade: 59
Are you tired of mundane workplaces where apathy reigns, and innovative thinking is seen as radical? Look no further! Join Visionary Innovations Inc., where we're on a mission to reinvent the future. As our Hiring Manager, you'll be the antidote to uninspired hiring practices, shaping a culture that's diverse, inclusive, and ruthless in its pursuit of excellence. If you're a proactive, multi-talented individual ready to supercharge our recruitment agenda, bring your auto-motivated spirit and ex-pertise to our team. Embrace a workplace where creativity and innovation are pre-requisites, and together, we'll create a vision of success that's truly visionary.
ReplyDeleteUsed words: 1) Apathy; 2) radical; 3) re-; 4) antidote; 5) un-; 6) ruthless; 7) ex-; 8) multi-; 9) super-; 10) re-; 11) agenda; 12) auto-; 13) pre-; 14) vis-;
Do you want to work for a company that offers an antidote to the apathy and monotony of the sales industry? As a Sales Manager at Propaganda inc, you will be responsible for:
Delete- Conducting market research and competitor analysis to identify new prospects and trends in the industry.
To be succesful in this role,you will need:
- Knowledge about the latest sales trends and best practices, as well as the relevant laws and regulations.
If you are interested in joining our team at Propaganda inc, please send your resume and cover letter to [careers@propaganda.com]. We look forward to hearing from you soon!
used words:1) antidote;2)apathy;3)propaganda;4)prospects;5)relevant.
Student Merjen
DeleteTownSend Press 39/50
Vocabulary 30 /30
Length (5+ sentences) 10/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Fantastic work Merjen! You used all 5 words correctly. Keep up the good work! Grade: 89%
Student Mergen
DeleteTownSend Press 45/50
Vocabulary 30 /30
Length (5+ sentences) 10/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Well done Mergen! I actually clapped when I read your paragraph! Excellent work with all 14 vocabulary words. My only comment is that the words prerequisite and expertise don’t require a dash( - ) in between. Grade: 95
Job Title: Store Manager
ReplyDeleteJob Description:
Provide relevant customer service and respond to customer inquiries and complaints. Reinforcing new strategies to increase sales. Radically examine merchandise to ensure that it is correctly priced and displayed. Making proper agenda for inventory taking, reconciling cash receipts and making sure cleanliness of business premises.
Used words: 1) relevant; 2) reinforce; 3) radical; 4) agenda
Student Shabana
DeleteTownSend Press 44/50
Vocabulary 30 /30
Length (5+ sentences) 8 /10 – only wrote 4 sentences
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Well done Shabana! You used all 4 words correctly. However, you only wrote 4 sentences instead of 5. The last one, should have a period after “taking” instead of a comma. Grade: 92%
🌟 Hiring Announcement 🌟
ReplyDeletePosition: Content Writer
We have an exciting opportunity for a Content Writer to join our team!
📋 Job Agenda:
Craft engaging and relevant content.
Develop compelling articles, blog posts, and social media content.
Collaborate with our team to reinforce our brand's message.
🧐 What We're Seeking:
A creative thinker with a radical approach to storytelling.
Someone with the antidote to writer's block – a true wordsmith!
A professional who brings enthusiasm, not apathy, to the table.
Ability to turn even the most bland topics into exciting reads.
💼 What We Offer:
Competitive salary and benefits.
Opportunities for career growth and prospects.
If you're ready to join a team that doesn't settle for the ordinary and embraces the extraordinary, then we want to hear from you. Don't be shy; our hiring process isn't ruthless!
Vocabularies:
agenda, antidote, apathy, bland, radical, reinforce, relevant, ruthless, prospects
Student Jolene
DeleteTownSend Press 48 /50
Vocabulary 30/30
Length (5+ sentences) 10 /10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: Jolene! You truly went above and beyond with this assignment! I’m impressed with how you were able to use 9 nine vocabulary words. You also used other challenging words correctly. On top of that, you organized the information perfectly. You truly have a strong domain of the English language. Well done today! Grade: 98%
We are hiring!!
ReplyDeleteIf you are an Engineer seeking for a nice position to develop your skills, this propaganda is for you.
You will have to write essays that reinforce the values of our company to post weekly at our journal. Also, It is important to have striking thoghts and relevant opinions, rater than a bland perspective of life.
If you think you can fit our requirements, please select a time in our agenda so we can meet next week.
We are looking forward to see you and to start working togheter.
Words used: propaganda, reinforce, relevant, bland, agenda.
Student Ana
DeleteTownSend Press 48 /50
Vocabulary 30 /30
Length (5+ sentences) 10/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments:
Hi Ana!
You used “propaganda” incorrectly in the second sentence. The word “advertisement” would be a better fit. The other 4 words were used correctly. Well done! Grade: 98%
KIDS FOUNDATION.
ReplyDeletePOSITION: Teacher.
Kids foundation is an organization that offers stimulating and engaging learning experiences to the kids. School manager position plays a vital role in the development of effective strategies, tracks students performance and identifies the area of need improvements.
Job Description:
- Manage school office work and provide relevant support as required.
- Create an agenda of monthly meetings.
- Develop and implement curriculum for meaningful learning experiences.
- Lead the teachers with a ruthless engagement to approach excellence.
- Arrange educational sessions for teachers to reinforce different learning activities.
Words Used: Relevant, agenda, ruthless, reinforce.
Student Safina
DeleteTownSend Press 38 /50
Vocabulary 30 /30
Length (5+ sentences) 10/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10 /10
Comments: Well done Safina! You used all 4 words correctly. Excellent job with your grammar as well. Grade: 88%
Hey there! Are you looking for an exciting opportunity in the translation industry? As a hiring manager at our translation company, we have some amazing prospects for you! We are seeking talented individuals who can reinforce our team with their language skills. Your relevant experience and expertise will be valued as we strive for excellence in providing top-notch translation services. Join our team and be part of a radical and innovative company that is not afraid to take risks and push boundaries. Don't worry, we're not ruthless, but we do expect dedication and a passion for languages. Ready to embark on this exciting journey with us? Apply now!
ReplyDeleteRuthless
Prospects
Radical
Relevant
Reinforce
Lina Abu Dalu
Student Lina
DeleteTownSend Press 43 /50
Vocabulary 30/30
Length (5+ sentences) 10 /10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10 /10
Comments: I loved the enthusiasm in your paragraph Lina! I can tell you really put your heart into it. All the words were used correctly. Well done! Grade: 93
Words: Relevant, agenda, prospects
ReplyDeleteBest option
General Summary:
Teach ancient Chinese literature, Chinese calligraphy, and Chinese painting.
Responsible for curriculum designing, teaching courses, organizing and overseeing the school needs of courses.
Flexible work agenda. Good job prospects.
Must hold Master Degree relevant to education
School is located at 3931 wWn St, Houston TX 77479
Student Robin
DeleteTownSend Press 24 /50
Vocabulary 30 /30
Length (5+ sentences) 10/10
Grammar, punctuation & clarity 10/10
Comments: You used all 3 vocabulary words correctly. Unfortunately, you didn’t finish everything in TownSend Press. Otherwise, your grade would be much higher. Grade:74
A Reputable company is looking for Manager. Relevant to the Sales Market for their products. it's excellent prospect for the bright future those who can work with company agenda.
ReplyDeleteI cannot grade this until I have a name.
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